critiques
Critique: Stimulating brain to lower pain
Today’s poster comes from kindly contributor Emma Taylor, who was generous enough to share her honours project. Click to enlarge!
Quick thoughts.
Quick thoughts.
- Good structure that lets me know I read in rows.
- Visual hierarchy is generally good.
- Looks crowded. Would benefit from more space around everything, but particularly between text and edged of blue boxes they are in.
- Underlining text in discussion would probably be better as bold or italic text.
- Another editing run to cut more text might help. (I know, that bit is hard.)
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